Today's patch I wrote this
" I was walking to my friend and I asked him to tell my ex-girlfriend "I am not the bad one who made up that rumor and I wanted to ask you if we can just be friends and forget the whole thing" and when my friend came back he said that she said "Balh Blah Blah" and when I heard I was mad and tomorrow I am going to tell her myself and I am going to be embarressed but I am goint to do it. When I went over to my friends house and we kept arguing and he told me that she thinks that he is the good one and I am the bad one but I am going to fix that tomorrow. I hope you all under stand that on December 11, 2009 I am going to tell her that this is a mistake and that my friend is the bad one so that is going to be over quick."
That was my patch and I hope you liked it because that was the best work I have done but I am going to make something even better! I hope you like this other story I made about these two football games.
" Football
I was at my friends house and there is a high school near his house and we were sitting in the snow. When the game started we were cheering for the lions because they were the home team and most people vote for there home team well that is what me and Triston were doing the same thing, voting for the home team. When the home team would score we would go TOUCHDOWN!!! Every one in the stadium were screaming and yelling and when they would score a field goal we would go GOLASO!!!! (Goal in Spanish) and then every one would still be screaming and yelling. I was getting bored and I was going home and my friend said wait and I was like what and then he said that we were going to skateboard but I didn’t want to but I did then I started to have fun. When it was the end of the day I was so tired when I went inside I just went straight to bed then when I woke up I was not tired at all and it was my bed time and kept on telling my parents that I am not tired and then they would still make me go to bed. When I woke up the next morning I was not tired at all and I was such so happy that I was ready to just go to school and get the day over with but I was such not happy when I got to school because I had to stay in and do the rest of my homework. When it was the end of the day when this girl came up to me and said that our boyfriend and girlfriend thing was over and that it wouldn’t work out and I so mad that I just wanted to hurry up and go home. When the day was over and it was time for me to go to bed I was just ready to get in bed and get ready for the weekend. When it was the next day the first thing I did was went to the bathroom and then I went to the computer to check my blog and still no comments and I was pretty mad at first but then I started to come down but I was still mad at that. When I went to this website called www.funny-games.com I was getting so many points that they had to close me out because you couldn’t earn a point of points because you can only have that amount of points and when they closed me out I was mad that I just wanted to talk to the owner but I let that pass and I just went to a different site. When there was another football game on T.V I was really into this one because it was the Falcons against the Broncos. When the game was over the Falcons won and I was happy because they were going to the super bowl. When I was just ready to stop writing I thought to myself “ Why would I leave my readers hanging but then I started to write some more.
THE END
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Dear Brenden,
ReplyDeleteWOW! you are like me! I love to daydream and express my mind. Also, nice story!